Whoa! That was great:) Poor Rasha :( Keep writing!!

hey my bestest pally, i love the story. i cant wait for more. and i noticed that u made the new kid in school a girl instead of a guy like u had originally. so is there a love story in the future? hm. that is the question.

Wow~ It's beautiful! I hope you get more written soon. ^^ Wanna know what happens~

Hey, good job here. I really got a sense of the character. Great, now I need to find out what happens with him. No, it's a good thing but it means I have another story to look out for and I already have too many. Maybe I should use my favourite list more. Oh well, I can just bump one of the others for yours- its good- keep it up! (sorry to ramble at you) :)

caitlin-your story is awesome and anything but boring. just wait until the cyberspace people hear more of the story like i have. ha ha, i know whats gonna happen. mwhahahahaha! (evil laugh)