Reviews for At the Cardinal's Carriage Door

Reviews For: At the Cardinal's Carriage Door

NurseDelilah 2005-06-12 ch 1,	abuseAmazing. I loved your imagery and how everything just flowed! Maybe worte music to this? eh? ^_^ Anyway you mentioned a beta for my story. By any chance would you like to do it? If not it's fine =D Just get back to me ^.^
Green Beret 2005-05-26 ch 1,	abusemalachi! just found out its you off Sharakinpaix's page. good stuff yet again, keep them coming.
I-Luv-Mosquiton 2005-05-17 ch 1,	abuseyou again? sheesh... but thanks for a compliment FINALLY you're not flaming me or my friends.
Sarge 2005-05-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat job with the rhyming scheme, it was effectively suttle; perfect for the kind of songs we need. Keep writing more songs. I'll work on melodies I suppose, that is, if its not too presuming of me.
Sharakinpaix 2005-05-12 ch 1,	abuseCongrats on your first lyrics! Hey remember Cake's "Sheep go to Heaven, Goats go to Hell"? Way to be angsty. "I'll find your tailor, That Vlad the Impaler" haha so angsty and witty! Hey what was the reference to the fig leaves and the cardinal's carriage door? I'm a little shaking on your references here, probably cuz I'm not educated about the Bible, hehe... I kinda got Michaelmas tho... Christmas except it's Michael's holiday? Heheh... Again, love your imagery! Keep up the good work!
i was a postcard 2005-05-11 ch 1,	abuseWee! is the first thing that comes to mind. Hmm, strange, yes? I'd like to hear this. For some reason this kinda reminds me of The Weakerthans. I very much like this.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-11 ch 1,	abuseSo beautiful and flashy and unique. I love that last line. Leonard's church. Very good for your first song. Much better than all the songs some people will ever write. And you'll turn your white mood, like a clock rendered lewd,If he explores you! - I'd love to hear that sung!

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