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| ukranianmira 2008-07-17 ch 3,  | abusemoremore more more more |
| painted_nightmare 2005-10-30 ch 3, anon. | abusedundundundun...he's got the happy pills! run for it! *more dramatic music*NEwho, plz update! i've been waiting forever and cant keep quiet NEmore! *poke* r u dead? if ur not, then i kno u can hear me! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! |
| crazychick88 2005-07-16 ch 3, | abusethe story is really cute. |
| stained innocence13 2005-07-10 ch 3, | abusedood! callista totally sounds like me! ah!@ rip off!! !copyright noH! just cuz ur one of my bestfriends doesnt mean dat u can rip off my personality! hahaha! dat was a joke love! but seryoso, she sounds like me! loL! but i love it cass! do update soon! |
| Tatsu-Dreamer 2005-07-09 ch 3, | abuseI like it so far. The chemistry between the twins and such is very good. Keep it up. However, where does the conflict come in? |
| B.S. Ha 2005-07-07 ch 3, | abuseoh my, if i were calli, you'd never hear or see drake alive again(jk)NEwayz, keep updating! |
| Carbon Slash 2005-07-07 ch 3, | abuseRyan is in denial haha. I say go for it! :) |
| iluvsweep 2005-07-05 ch 3, | abusehahahah! aww a hyper drake is *so* funny! LOL! love it, hehe, sorry haven't reviewed sooner...i was one of those very bad silent readers for a bit, *blushes* ever so sorry lol! but at least i'm reviewing now! aww callista's so cute, and poor ryan! hehe, the notorious player, wel second to drake that is, and they're both falling, how sweet! i definitely think drake and nicole go together, and then ryan and callista, but you can always use jake a bit for some drama and stuff! spice the plot up a bit and all hehe, but in the end, yeah callie and ryan, sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!! LOL! oh no...i think i took some of drake's happy pills by mistake! arggh! must...go..be hyperr! lol! (hm...that was very odd, hehe ignore me! but DO update soon!) |
| CrazyCheerChick 2005-07-05 ch 3, | abuseI think it should be Ryan/Cal and Drake/Nicole. Yeah I absolutly love it! Keep it up! ~Kelsey |
| jULzEyy 2005-07-05 ch 2, | abusei lerve it!! hahaha bilis bilisan mo ha!!:D |
| Image of the Invisible 2005-07-05 ch 3, | abusehahaha! loving this chap! loving this story to bits!! ;p update soon!...again! hhahahaa |
| stoolzeeeyyy 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusecass, why do u always do this to me?! hay naku... write the next chapter faster nga! hahahahaha ur stories drive my crazy! i leerv it! hahaha |
| Image of the Invisible 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abusetama mehn. ryan and callie. tapos jake gets jealous. NYAHAHAHAHAHA. shkiddin. but i really want ryan and callie togetha...haha. dali! |
| Image of the Invisible 2005-07-05 ch 2, | abuse** CASS. I LOVE THIS STORY TO BITS. why the hell aren't you updating!? tangina dude. dali dali. write now. hahahaha. i told julz to check it out cuz i loved this story loads. hahaha. update soon. uy. town ata tayo with julz nicole n miss wella soon. game? :) |
| pennels29 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abusei love this story |