*cheers* This is AWSOME! I love it...and I really relate...Keep it up.-pammy-

the repetitiveness in this poem works really well, it give it a true feeling of how the world spins in circles, and sometimes... there's nothing you can do... i liked it...

Full of troubles and sorrows. Thought-provoking.

two lines seem to sum up the need- "I just want someone to try, To show me I’m worth it."Everyone needs appreciation, and love.

Excellent, would make a good Evanescence style song I think. One typo though - "tare" should be "tear"