Hey,

This is a good story. But, it hasn't been updated for a while. I just wanted to ask if this story is on hiatus?

I really hope not.Hopefully you get your muse back!Mahveen

are you going to update this one?

Well, I read all four chapters, and I must say that it looks interesting. I can't wait to see the two endings - is one going to be good, and one bad, I guess? Well, I'll find out.

Wow! You always were a talented writer.

Woah, I read this in one sitting, and I'm seriously impressed. Geez, the father really needs to rethink his priorities. He's still his son.Good thing he's got J. on his side.I really love the way the story's written. I mean, it's so personal...Just, really incredible, i guess.^.^

Nice to have a good friend. Why do I get the feeling bad things are ahead?

wow. that was so, horrible, how his father was to him. But the relationship he has with Jalen is so uplifting. It really is.

Keep it up ^_^ Update as soon as possible.

~Arayuldawen~

I love this story and can relate to it so well. Being a gay or bisexual teen is hard, and stories like this make people like myself feel more normal, more balanced and unafraid.

Thank you for that.

I love it! It's so sweet and sad at the same time.

You're my hero.

the descriptions are amazing and you've taken what could've been tangents and made them reletive. luv hannah banana

awesome!! cant wait for next chapter =D

*squeals* LEIK OMFG SUSPENSE!!

Ah it kills! *gasp*

I love this story!

I love you!

Ah there is LOVE!

♥

:D:D

Please keep up the awesome writing skillz :O ;)

Damn religious freak! Poor guy!

wow... intense, i feel like i'm going to cry.

~galene

very touching and theres a sense of beauty in ur writing. great work!