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| Violet 2006-03-15 ch 19, anon. | abuse*pokes furiously* you must continue writing this! ish brilliant! gack! |
| Casey Drake 2005-12-02 ch 17,  | abuseWhat happens next in the story?? I can't WAIT for your next update, because this story is great. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2005-10-31 ch 19, | abuseAHH!! freaky... what happens next?? :) CD |
| InSilverShadows 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI"M OFFICIALLY GOING TO READ ALL OF THIS. |
| Inda 2005-10-08 ch 13, anon. | abuseI haven't reviewed in a long time. . . In response to your review, don';t worry there isn't going to be much modern day. i'm still too much of a fantasy freak! Yeah, I'm updating pretty fast. . . This is a really good staory and I STILL love it and keep wondering what will happen, even though I've already read 'till chapter 16. . . Don't hurt me! Keep Writing! -Inda 'THe SPECIALIST one" |
| shigure 2005-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseum...kisa? when did you want your furuba back? *hides in closet* |
| Violet 2005-09-22 ch 19, anon. | abuseWow, you have a lot of chapters! been a bit *cough*months*cough* scince i reviewed, but hey! This is teh good, as usual from teh bookster! I like the heaven scene very much, and i cannot wiat to see what the 'gifts' will be... I will try harder to get online, but my mom's being stingy with the time I can get on...gr... Ellie and Kevin! *winkwinknudgenudge* |
| Shigure 2005-09-21 ch 19, anon. | abuseSPUH! GLOMPGLOMPGLOMP! I'm having lotsa fun in school and i MISS MY KISA! and i love soulcleanser but i cant review except to say that if you became friends with spellcheck it would make me very happy. we have to do something soon! like climb! YES! love, Shigure-chan |
| callie 2005-09-07 ch 19, anon. | abuseit doesnt sound very sweet to me |
| Quarantine 2005-09-05 ch 19, | abuseOh, so Yuki's really happy to be back home, right? (I'm joking. . .). Whee. Well, you seem to be doing fine as far as writers block. . . . I'm too tired to write even if I had the time and ideas. But I should be fine in the end. LOVELY CHAPTER. Heehee. |
| callie 2005-08-25 ch 18, anon. | abusethats what my daddy says when we go to my grandmas house |
| Quarantine 2005-08-23 ch 18, | abuseOh, so now Arisa gets gifts (I'm assuming she gets more since it was called 'The First Gift'). Is your writers block gone now then? Whee. An update. Um. . . Hahaha, Yuki must not be happy at all. Leiko. . . 'kay yeah. |
| Casey Drake 2005-08-23 ch 18, | abusethis is funny, and also very cool. some minor typos, but otherwise, fine in spelling and grammar that I could see. :) CD |
| Violet 2005-08-01 ch 17, anon. | abuse*Gasp* I love heaven scenes! i wanna see what you picture heaven like...and now I remeber Leiko. that was kind of a random demon, though...wouldn't someone sense it?And what kind of demon is Leiko? |
| Quarantine 2005-07-30 ch 17, | abuseHeh, I like your snowman. "It ell to the ground" - fell. I had forgotten how annoying Leiko was. -.- |