I like the structure you use in your poems. Good use of words in the beginning, "Crystal shades of the lightest sapphire". Gives a unique way of description

PERFECT! I just love your "voice", and the emotion...you're very good at writing poetry! =D;>

"your real" - you're?

Beautiful. I love the lines about his eyes, I can see them in my head :D.

-write on!

hmm. not sure what to say, its different.

Ms. Solitaire

That was heartfelt and earnest and I enjoyed reading it. You are definatly going on my favorite Author's list! feel privledged because there are only two people on there... -Paige

i like it! very good.

very nice... only one problem i found was 'saphire' should be spelt with only one p. other than that, great job. keep it up =0)

You're talking about me right? (lol) Hey I really think that this is a sweet poem with nice structure and style. You have a great way with words. Keep it up please.