good thought, good theme. Oh, and thanx for the reviews.

oh sad ending, really sweet poem it gets your feelings across perfectly.

Hey! Thanks so much for the review! I want to r/r your work properly but at the moment I don't have time damn it...I have an explanatory speech due on thursday and I'm still doing the research!

I really like your poem! I understand this feeling all to well at the moment...It has a nice, clear format with logical flow and ideas. Very well written!

-Write on!

Very good, I liek this one a bit more than the last two, good emotional expression.

Ms. Solitaire

I can't find the words to say what I thought about this poem... so I will have to settle with wow.

wow, this poem had the most strangest effect on me~~ hm... maybe, cuz i relate so very well to the poem? Anyways~ Great work!

keep writing!