Very visual with a good point. I would just replace "very" (4th line) with sg. more original (truly?). With respect, b a

oh...this is really very good...it's a piece of poetry with a good point behind it...although i'm kind of confused with the point of view...this somehow reflects my poem Flawed Perfection...pls do check it out...

truly yours...

Wow. I usually hate poetry that isn't strictly grammatical, but this was written so beautifully that I almost didn't notice the formatting. Your grasp of the English language is truly amazing...I'm glad to have stumbled across this.

very deep and thoughtprovoking. beautiful striking descriptions, really dazzerling piece. love the question at the end.

Rather good. I wrote something kind of like this but more to do with Hollywood. Great poem.

Awesome, I really love this piece. . so very true! Expressive, emotional. . interesting. luv it! *meg

the imagery in the poem is very strong, and I like the last line in the poem, which puts it all into perspective. It rhymes, too! good job.

I love how the poem makes you stop and think at the end, it's really good and brings up nice points. i like the poem and the message, great work _ keep writing your wonderful poems! (and stories)*TigerHawk*

very creative. great job.

Hmm... quite insightful, a look beyond today's hype of glamourizing and highlighting everything.

-ShadowNemesis

thanks for reviewing me.I really like your writing style.

This poem is great. It reminds me of "Everybody's Fool" by Evanescence.

O I like this. Gives me an image of a perfect person but not real inside. Nice.

nicely contemplated!

made me smile! wow, this has a lot of meaning and deep feelings into it. and i love the way you make it rhyme! love it!