|Reviews for Ad Model|
| Basnirka amaterka 4/1/07 . chapter 1
Very visual with a good point. I would just replace "very" (4th line) with sg. more original (truly?). With respect, b a
| laughter at the funeral 11/5/05 . chapter 1
oh...this is really very good...it's a piece of poetry with a good point behind it...although i'm kind of confused with the point of view...this somehow reflects my poem Flawed Perfection...pls do check it out...
| ValkyrieRavenfeather 10/8/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I usually hate poetry that isn't strictly grammatical, but this was written so beautifully that I almost didn't notice the formatting. Your grasp of the English language is truly amazing...I'm glad to have stumbled across this.
| citrus scented 8/31/05 . chapter 1
very deep and thoughtprovoking. beautiful striking descriptions, really dazzerling piece. love the question at the end.
| Moonjava 8/20/05 . chapter 1
Rather good. I wrote something kind of like this but more to do with Hollywood. Great poem.
| Meg Spalding 7/25/05 . chapter 1
Awesome, I really love this piece. . so very true! Expressive, emotional. . interesting. luv it! *meg
| temblance 6/29/05 . chapter 1
the imagery in the poem is very strong, and I like the last line in the poem, which puts it all into perspective. It rhymes, too! good job.
| TygirSky 6/22/05 . chapter 1
I love how the poem makes you stop and think at the end, it's really good and brings up nice points. i like the poem and the message, great work _ keep writing your wonderful poems! (and stories)*TigerHawk*
| colorguardgeek 6/21/05 . chapter 1
very creative. great job.
| ShadowNemesis 6/20/05 . chapter 1
Hmm... quite insightful, a look beyond today's hype of glamourizing and highlighting everything.
| Adrian Parker 6/18/05 . chapter 1
thanks for reviewing me.I really like your writing style.
| Closed for remodeling 6/18/05 . chapter 1
This poem is great. It reminds me of "Everybody's Fool" by Evanescence.
| B. M. Reed 6/18/05 . chapter 1
O I like this. Gives me an image of a perfect person but not real inside. Nice.
| catseyeview 5/31/05 . chapter 1
| lackluster 5/30/05 . chapter 1
made me smile! wow, this has a lot of meaning and deep feelings into it. and i love the way you make it rhyme! love it!