This is good. Word structure, flow and thought. Awesome.

Firstly one minor typo 'you barely eventry.' - even try.

Ok...now with that out of the way I can tell you how good your poem is lol. 'What should I do' is a question that has been in my mind a bit lately too. I really like the story you have set up here - very well put together.

-Write on!

what should you do? i don't know, but what i have to do is tell you that you did a great job with this poem.

Thats a question that has plagued mankind for centuries. Good Job. Well Done.

Ms. Solitaire

This one is sad, almost ball worthy. I understand how the narrorator felt because I've be through something similar. I enjoyed this very much and you'll hear from me again... -Paige

Heartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.