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Reviews For: The Mechanical Whir of a Butterfly's Wings
Arkash 2005-05-29 . chapter 2
Great story with a strong plot. Jack and Alice are likeable characters.

Good Job!! *_*
Arkash 2005-05-18 . chapter 1
A very interesting beginning, with depth. I like your characters and setting. *_~
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