I love insanity! So much more entertaining than the picturesque-ly rational. Anways. This was delightfully twisted and sour and oh-so morbid. Well done!

wow. quite insane, yes, but in an intriguing way.

Wow this caustic, cutting tone and diction was breathtaking. Absolutely amazing.

Although I have absolutely no liking for teletubbies, I just kept reading on. It's really interesting and nice!!

is againtoo lazy to sign in. rawr. i think insanity sounds liek j00. ((: it's simple and it appeals. painfully charming the senses (OOH,THAT SOUNDED HARD.)

it be horrificbeautiful. i love. -kismet.

haha your poem very funny. although the ending is so sad.ohh how could he punch his mum that is so mean.didn't understand how the noonooshasha thing sort of connects haha. but i like the following stanza on lala. hee.the jumping from the window to teletubby land thing is kinda cliched right. haha.

okay goodnight rei.

An oddly charming poem, unrestricted by its childlike narrator. There's a hilarous simplicity which makes it quaint.