Ok… you did answer what happens when Milon goes in to see Infinity… but well… I really wasn’t fond of the ending… you had a grand story going… then it just dropped… o ‘well… it was still a good story and props for finishing it with one last mission for Kennedy.

sry i meant Kennedy not Sophie...

holy crap... that's craziness... and i bet sophie has to go in to see the crazy demension lady b/c she's the only one that didn't/hasn't volunteered... that'd be great...

wow... so doc was bad... firgures... craziness on the numbers game... but kinda makes you wonder... for example... just how many Milons are there... craziness... and yes... you've got me wondering again just what happens when Milon goes to see Infinity... hmm... can't wait...

yay... she hooked up with the gang... odd that they didn't seem to surprised... but it works... so... Kennedy is the deminsional mother of Sophie... wow... and salvador... that explains a good bit... like why they're getting rid of him... the whole Milon killing his best friend/Sophie and choosing was kinda confusing... but i'm sure it'll get cleared up...

now that's just cool... all of it... cool... and you did answer my main question... for some reason I never put it together that Pitch WAS Ryder... go figure... whelp... can't wait to see what happens next...

wow... memory or reality... and how in the world does he get out of this one... also... random wondering...but how does Ryder meet Milon and the gang?...

hmm... mass confusion... so pitch is good... but bad because something was controlling him... next question becomes what... can't wait for more...

I'm wondering were there is too... and maybe what the world is called... Velcro is just like Ryder isn't he... cool cool...

crazyness... lots of happenings in the past two chapters... and 14 made me a bit confused at first... i take it she dived into the Viper guy's memories or something... can't wait to see what's next...

new characters... yay... Sean sounds like an odd one... i wonder what his power is... and finally... Milon's story is gonna get revieled... yay...

wow... home sounds like a fall out zone... and a genie... very cool... and Milon a healer and a glowing person (can't 'member what you called it)... very cool... wonder what else he can do...

O! Should be interesting to see how she reacts to their home. Though I guess t's not quite as different from her own as the world their in now. Or even the one they just left.

:-D Eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Ryder suspense... cool cool... and the whole bite from the guard really makes ya want to know what happened inside the building... Infinity eh... kinda appropriate name if ya think about it... speaking of names... how in the world do you come up with so many neat ones?... can't wait to find out what their home is like...

wow... lots of change... bet she doesn't get to far... and the whole dimension/copies bit was perty cool stuff... not sure I followed all of it... and what's up with them shutting her out... geez... :P good stuff...