Oh great job! I still liked the other one, but this one was, wow I can only imagine, thats the kind of dream thats just so unnerving and creepy it makes you not wanna go back to sleep.I think its fine the way it is, it seems like a good ending unless there is somthing you'd like to add to the story itself. Overall, nice job I think.
Alice

Hm. Do you think he really does know better?

animagess@hotmail.com

That is really creepy! Don't you just hate when kids who look young but act old invade your dreams and creep you out?

weird dream

oh, my! that toys with your mind so evilly!

ok... that last line was just *scary*.. But I like- nice description too ^^

Indeed a macarbe... And I don't know what else to say. Even if I don't know what it means, it fits...

Whoa...and I thought I had scary dreams...well, it was good, so far...

I like to write down my exact reaction to stories. Here it is:
"Haha that's /cool/."
Good, original writing. Great job. Keep it up.