Makes me yearn for lost friends over the years. Good job.

Wow...Beautiful description. The reader gets such a powerful image out of this. Starts out depressing tho'. By the way, konnichi-wa! ^^

Really good! I have lostcontact with a friend of more then 10 years lately and this mirrors my feelings, good job keep writing!

Beautiful detail and imagry. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.