hey this is a really neat, kinda creepy story. I think you should update and pcik it up again

O gr angry sex. :D For some reason when Slayter mentions having the neccessary implements I was thinking salt and pepper. But those are condiments. Other than that, I honestly think I would stab a person in the throat with a rusty knife if they ever called me mutt. I'm worried what's going to happen when Mr. Evil Incarnate finds out that Justin's a submissive though. Scary thought! ^^

"The steel coffins embedded into the wall stood out, mocking life. They were where everyone was destined, and there was nothing a person could do about it." E. how grim. We should make funeral dance music. Cool chapter. I'd like to tent Captain Morgan's trousers. Oh, that is also depressing. *tries to elude the clouds of GLOOM*

AH! Lorena! How creepy... ^_^U
Captain Morgan is awesome though, I would love to be Captain Morgan! lol He had like, two lines in the entire first chapter, we! Oh I was going to wait til I read all the chapters to comment, but who could resist? *dances a jig* I will read more...

I was wondering when you're going to update.

Yay! You're BACK! Great update!

NO! WHY! Why did you live it like that? Update? Please? I realy love the story so far & I want to read more please?

Did you know that they have developed a new lie detector? It monitors something in the gut, and apparently it works really well, better than professional lie dectectors!

I really love this story...I wish you'd update soon...Your writing is just wonderful, and I love your ideas...they're all one of a kind...

Good lord this is HOT HOT HOT! omg *fans self* im very very interested in this story and wow i reeaally want to read more. i nearly cried when i saw that it was on hold but decided in a last ditch attempt to review and see whether i could convince you to continue this story...

*gets on knees and begs* :P

nah but really i hope you continue this story as its an excellent piece of work and so delightfully naughty ;P

sorry it took me forever (and a day) to review, I had like 500 emails to get through and I kept putting it off

wow, interesting. Update soon girl. I'm liking this more an more.

OMG!! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Its a good chapter I must admit but I need MORE! Please update soon!

Oi! I seriously like your story so far. It's highly interesting, but i wonder what's going to happen when justin's day life and dante's night life mix and justin finds out about the murders...please update sooN!!

So freakin awesome. I love how right away you can start to make predictions of what will happen next! Your mind really starts to wander after this one. Wonderful job! ~P'Dale Buddy out