 Strelitzian 2008-04-15 . chapter 1*applauds* this is great, real fun to read. Put a bit more description in, though! Dialogue is all good, but back it up a little. |
 Schinn-Sama 2005-09-21 . chapter 1Oh odd. I've had a month like that.
I liked it. |
 Forest Passant 2005-08-26 . chapter 1This was very funny, and I liked your writing style too.
Why *do* Wednesdays feel like Fridays? It must be the government... |
 Raven Oghma 2005-06-17 . chapter 1Fantastic.
Also, I think I love you.
Anyway, this was fantastic.
-Raven Oghma |
 whizzo 2005-05-19 . chapter 1 That was a bit confusing, but fun nevertheless. It's good to see you writing new stuff. I'm glad you're back. |
 neermore 2005-05-14 . chapter 1This is amazing! Have you ever read The Martian Chronicles by Ray Bradbury? This piece is a lot like that style.
Great job, good word choices, no glaringly hideous grammar. |
 WarriorHeart 2005-05-13 . chapter 1Glad you're back! It certainly has been a while. I thought this story was very good. What is a day? LOL, I can just see myself trying to explain to the administrators here at me school about why I've only beeing coming in on day a week... *Because the othersays all felt like Saturday and Sunday!* Hope to see some more posts from you! |
 Snix 2005-05-12 . chapter 1Nifto. I love stuff like this. |
 Saeger 2005-05-12 . chapter 1Brilliance in stupidity. ^^ The way of life today... I like that guys reasoning! I wish *I* could pull that off... Even if only for a few days, it'd be cool... ^^;; But the pUs would kill me...Neat... Funny. ^^ Great job! |