Wow- this is truely amazing. Really. The words just fall together so well. You really have a natural talent. Or atleast I think so. Please keep writing :)

*silver tears stream down my cheeks*woah! that is sweet! great rythm, and beautiful use of words! i like it

I loved the rythym of the poem. It made the words flow so well.

Kittie~Mistress

I love this poem, i could feel the pain of life and death combine, it's just amazing. whomever you are you're a great writer, keep it going-SJ

Interesting twist on reality. I can't say it realy matches the good Doctor's writing (gothy or not). However, I'd say it is still good.

It's so dark yet so clean cut that it's irresistable. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

-PT