Overall the responses to your poems have been largely negitive. I don't understand why. It's a touching poem and if the neanderthals who reviewed had actually read it and thought about it they could not have been so blunt and unhelpful. I liked the poem, it made me think. It was well written (even if the underlining was a bit much in places) and catches in it the thoughts and mood of your friend eith the bad heart and many others like him.

Stick with it,Galleena

P.S. I thought your summary was a good explaination of the poem, it gave it a place and a person to belong to.

hAVE YOU FORGOTTEN DOOUT VIETNAMWAR AND THE waras tAh happoned after that. so in a since you did not grow up in the way you wrote iin youre poem. we will not have a draft and we will not have anyone anytime to soon vietnam war people are still living and the baby bomers and other people wo't allow a draft we suffered to mutch ( so to speek) from the vietnam war. But I really did like you're poem.

The "hearts" you want to use is possessive, not plural. The summary also doesn't make sense. You don't sign up for conscription.

At least I've played God of War...that was lame... But your poem wasn't... It made my heart feel good...