Good poem. I like the imagery of the light and the dark ... and the unknown.

This is one I could realte to...I like how you repeat the line"Here I go...", adds a different dimenson. Write more and check my poems when you get the chance!

its okay but it could use more descriptive words. make us imagine the darkness all around. the deep feeling that come with it but still a good poem. keep writing:)

Hey there, laura. I love this poem, mainly because it describes how my life has been. (I'm better now, though). You'll like my poem, Fresh Blood...

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Joe Asher

This poem I love. I've felt like this many times... Great job!

this poem is really good. i've noticed a pattern in your work with the darkness. i think the way you write makes your poems more interesting to read. you are a good poet. publish some more!

very mysterious...very good! haha!

DW

An excellent poem, another child of the dark.

Wow. This is cool. You should write more poetry, lioness. I think your good at this. It reminds me of some kind of romantic manga. Um... if you have the time, would you mind checking out my new fic, I Long For Your Voice.

Miss-Nina