|Reviews for NO LIGHT|
| AngelaSolis 5/28/05 . chapter 1
Good poem. I like the imagery of the light and the dark ... and the unknown.
| number1hippo 5/25/05 . chapter 1
This is one I could realte to...I like how you repeat the line"Here I go...", adds a different dimenson. Write more and check my poems when you get the chance!
| jainen-black 5/23/05 . chapter 1
its okay but it could use more descriptive words. make us imagine the darkness all around. the deep feeling that come with it but still a good poem. keep writing:)
| Mind Barrier 5/20/05 . chapter 1
Hey there, laura. I love this poem, mainly because it describes how my life has been. (I'm better now, though). You'll like my poem, Fresh Blood...
| Charlie 21 5/18/05 . chapter 1
This poem I love. I've felt like this many times... Great job!
| celentia-changingacconts 5/17/05 . chapter 1
this poem is really good. i've noticed a pattern in your work with the darkness. i think the way you write makes your poems more interesting to read. you are a good poet. publish some more!
| In Search of Sunrise 5/16/05 . chapter 1
very mysterious...very good! haha!
| DarkPharaoh1666 5/13/05 . chapter 1
An excellent poem, another child of the dark.
| Miss-Nina 5/13/05 . chapter 1
Wow. This is cool. You should write more poetry, lioness. I think your good at this. It reminds me of some kind of romantic manga. Um... if you have the time, would you mind checking out my new fic, I Long For Your Voice.