| Reviews for A Simple Mistake |
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UNwitty182 7/1/05 . chapter 1loved your story please update soon... |
Kat1989 7/1/05 . chapter 5Thats cool that you're able to write in English even though you don't normally use English. You don't have really many mistakes at all! Haha, that was so cute. The whole feet first thing was neat. I've read this story before, but I forgot about it because my last computer died and I didn't have a username on fictionpress yet. So here it is! I may have reviewed as Julia before, but I'm not sure... |
Krystal Nickle 7/1/05 . chapter 5you're from the philipines? thats awesome! i have a lot of friends from their. i live in texas, a state in the united states. and i just wanted to tell you that this was a great chapter. but i cant believe that she had her first kiss! and on television. how horrible. how old is she again? i mean, i had my first kiss when i was eight. its just hard to believe that an adult had never had a kiss before. i mean, i've sen Never Been Kissed with Drew Barrymore but i'm only 16 and everyone i know has had atleast one kiss. well, one of my friends has never had a real kiss. her only kiss was in kindergarden and she had kissed the boy on the cheek and he pushed her away hard afterwards. but still. has she had an experience like that when she was a little girl? or something? well i also just wanted to tell you how much i love her name. vixen mein. it is so unique. atleast it is to me but i live in the u.s. so it might be different for you. well, please update again soon! thanks! |
Krystal Nickle 6/13/05 . chapter 4what do you mean your english isn't very good? where do you live? your english is fine its just sometimes you add things that dont need to be added like in the last chapter you said that her eyes were staring wide-eyed at him. you should have just said she stared wide-eyed at him, not her eyes. but i dont want to tell you about your itty bitty barely noticeable mistakes. the only reason i even notice them is because my dad has drilled into me the perfect english and constantly corrects me. anywayz, i wanted to tell you that i liked this chapter. i wonder what she has up her sleave with all the questioning and her mischevious smiles. please update again soon! thanks! |
candymonster32 6/4/05 . chapter 4 I love your story, that was awesome update soon! |
Heather F. C 6/4/05 . chapter 4hehe. this was fun. i will marry him, even without the money. update son |
Angel Babe27 6/4/05 . chapter 4 Damn! I hate u Just...Im so Like going to kill u!U leave me hanging girl...by the way wer did u come up with the nay Vixen anyway...its cute ha...oppss need to stop here na i ust found out a nice story in fanfiction..take care and keep it coming |
Angel Babe27 6/3/05 . chapter 3 Hey Shes in Chapter 3 alredy Yipe! u have many reviews already congratulations!(Let Party)Soo do u still need my reviews?i like ur chapter 3 its cute and i really mean it!well stil waiting 4 more chapy just and oh yeah i told my friends from fanfiction to review ur work...goodluck Angel Babe27 |
Angel Babe27 6/3/05 . chapter 2 Cool Chap. mate...wow ur chapter is long and im so proud of u bestfriend! keep up the good work and oh yeah...ru going to put lemon on it. Angel Babe27 |
Angel Babe27 6/3/05 . chapter 1 god justine! Ur storie s so cute! look ha im ur bestfriend talaga ako gyud tika gi review and take note all the chapters so it means u had 4 reviews from me!gosh but anyway keep it coming girl...ur such a brat imo ko gi bitn imagine!GR! |
Carbon Slash 6/3/05 . chapter 4Ooh Vixen got something up her sleeve... naughty naughty girl :P |
Aly92691 6/3/05 . chapter 4 Hey! This story is really good, please keep posting it :-)Great job on developing your characters; Vixen's strong personality comes out a lot. Her name is perfect for her lolYou also did a nice job of describing things-I can picture everything 't wait to read the next chapter! |
katrona 6/3/05 . chapter 4 AH CLIFFHANGER |
Julia 6/3/05 . chapter 4 Hmm, I like it. Please update soon. |
Hydie 6/1/05 . chapter 3Wow! really good! I was wondering how the heck she would end up marrying a man that she didn't know. Well put together! You do tend to change your tenses, though and it's confusing. If you could fix that I'd see no problem with it! Update? Please? |