awesome poem, very morbid and powerful. keep up the great work!

So many strong, forceful words. And I love the idea of "unbeautiful". Have you ever read Tom Robbins? "Undreaming."

Nice job.

Peace, hearts and cheers.Jess

Bitter, angry, acrid, sharp . . . oh I loved this. I am in the exact mood for this. Another great job, you are awesome!

I loved the morbidness here, the bitterness is amazing.