short but good. keep writing.

O... me like this alot. Update... pretty please?

Interesting, and worth my time reading it.

However, afew things annoyed me. You refer to the sky as an 'abyss' just after you mention it is full og 'light fluffy clouds' and birds chirped melodies etc. An abyss is a deep hole of nothingness, the paradox doesn't fit well there.

*two cents thrown*

i the first chapter. nice humor in it. good details, too. the characters are great personalities.

Intriguing. I will keep an eye on this one :) It started with a bit of a cliche line, but I like the idea of your trio. If you play on the myths and legend, truth and lies fantasy sterotype, yet manage to subvert it to your own ideas, you'll have a fan for life.

This is a really intruiging story so far! I love the flowery language you used here- it fits the legend quality of the story, but isn't hard to read. I can't wait to read more soon!

i like this beginning. i want to see what happens. i think this would make a great story.