I love muchos. Yes, a very interesting story to say the least.

Very lovely. These characters are awesome, very well done, and developed. Gosh, these chapters are long...will come back for the next when I can.

I loved this story, and I love Callista;she kicks **! You go girl!

I love this! I shall not bother with normal nitpicking because this is a roleplay, and everybody knows that rps have their own rules. Anyway, great first part, writing, story, and characters are excellent. I will certainly come back to finish reading as soon as I find an ample opportunity.