Wow. Just... WOW. It leaves me speechless! You know, it reminds me of the True Thomas poem. Wonderful. You are so talented. Really love the way this poem flows (unlike my review, eh?) and the way you have so easily made it seem as if the characters are right in front of you.

Excellent. You're so talented, keep it up!

~Wind's Whisper.

wow. that was really good. How long did it take for you to finish that? Beautiful way of speech for that poem.