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| darkstar-rising 2006-02-04 ch 1,  | abuse"searching for truth while dancing for lies" That's brilliant. You have a talent for knowing when to finish your stanzas, for the best emphasis. |
| Amadea 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseit almost reminds me of phantom of the opera. nice vocab use. the puppet master seems to have a god-complex, as he says he's witnessing what god has wrought, but he is the one making up the story... like he owns the winds and the sun and can bend them to his wishes, just like he can manipulate the puppet. interesting...makes me think on the whole "god" "giving people free will" story. |
| a duel of pens 111 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAH! he published soemthing!! u did it ! WHEE!! *glomps mark* OMG!! its so COL! ur the best! i give it 100 out of 10! OMG! emial me!! i |
| Trajo 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuseYAY! i love it! *hugs* |