i felt that some lines weren't necessary, the flow was kind of awkward and it was too long in my opinion. However, the idea of the poem deserves some credit. Good job, keep writing. -ADD

gives a sense of chaos... like, what could u have done that was so bad?

Full of pain. Very good!

I like this poem's honesty. Well done.

"the kick I needed / to get me out the door" - I love that phrase. Very well written.