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Audwin
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseThere is nothing better than a true friend to have your back. Unfortunately for me, I realized whom a true friend when it was too late. Words are something small but when put to the fullest and sincere words, they are powerful.

Wonderfully written (even if it was "cheesy"): revised, thought out, powerful, and it came from the heart (the most important).

Continue your writing. Good luck in the future.

Also, don't worry; you are a writer before a girl so therefore should be treated as a writer (not a girl). To me, you are a writer of sincere words (as of the moment).
incandescent.smiles
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseokay. first loved it, who cares if it was cheesy?! I especially loved that last paragraph. second, if you haven't noticed, I took down almost everything. I'm not gonna be posting for the next couple months. so I'm going to start a mailing list for that time, and if you'd like to be on it, that's great, if not, that's fine too. my email is silvertears09@yahoo.com, let me know either way!

~leila*
Moon-Chaser
2005-05-17
ch 1,
abuseWow, I hope that they read this, honest raw emotions that I don't think are cheesy, corny or any food type!

Keep it up.
Sorrowful Dreams
2005-05-15
ch 1,
abusethis is actually quite good. I love the way you express yourself to true friends. keep it up.

~Sorrow~
ShadowPharoh
2005-05-14
ch 1,
abusenot cheesy! i hate that word. i like cheese...anyway, really sweet. ^_^

awesomenessness!

SP
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