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| Audwin 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThere is nothing better than a true friend to have your back. Unfortunately for me, I realized whom a true friend when it was too late. Words are something small but when put to the fullest and sincere words, they are powerful. Wonderfully written (even if it was "cheesy"): revised, thought out, powerful, and it came from the heart (the most important). Continue your writing. Good luck in the future. Also, don't worry; you are a writer before a girl so therefore should be treated as a writer (not a girl). To me, you are a writer of sincere words (as of the moment). |
| incandescent.smiles 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseokay. first loved it, who cares if it was cheesy?! I especially loved that last paragraph. second, if you haven't noticed, I took down almost everything. I'm not gonna be posting for the next couple months. so I'm going to start a mailing list for that time, and if you'd like to be on it, that's great, if not, that's fine too. my email is silvertears09@yahoo.com, let me know either way! ~leila* |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, I hope that they read this, honest raw emotions that I don't think are cheesy, corny or any food type! Keep it up. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abusethis is actually quite good. I love the way you express yourself to true friends. keep it up. ~Sorrow~ |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abusenot cheesy! i hate that word. i like cheese...anyway, really sweet. ^_^ awesomenessness! SP |