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| dot.dash.score 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseAww, this was a great read. Very cute. It wasn't awkward at all, except in the last paragraph. I have one piece of advice, though...it really interrupts the flow of the story when you put an A/N in the middle of the chapter, so I'd avoid that next time. Awesome read, though. [= |
| Karma 2008-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't quite get it... so Taite and Earnest weren't supposed to be the ones on the date together? Other then being completely confusing, it's not that bad. |
| Nub in Denial 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThere were some grammar problems... but the idea behind the story is hillarious! I didn't get it at first because I thought that the two boys were meant to get together by their scheming best friends... but then after re-reading I got what really happened. It was a nice read and I hope you write more soon~ |
| Limited Edition 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseOh but Starbucks isn't only in the US XD The grammar is a bit off...in many aspects. I like the formatting idea, it's really nice. The sneaky descriptions are also good. Take that author's note in the middle out, it's a big no-no. (WHY ON EARTH do people do that? I just don't get it.) It destroys the flow. Naaw cute XD hehe |
| vintage-thought-processes 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuse((cracks up)) that's hilarious. Truth is, I've always wondered if that didn't happen more often, I mean honestly if you're going to meet someone you've never seen in your life before, who's to say you'll get the wrong person? I really liked this story. It was tres cute! Especially the "Earnest said earnestly." ha. And my claps to Claudia and Michelle, even if their plan didn't turn out quite right. ha. |
| Edwit 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cool! I think I read this before, but I wonder why I didn't review... Hm... Maybe my computer was being gay. Probably. But this rocked, and it was so ironic, the ending. Yeah. Awesome. -Robin P.S.- I have a new story I thought you might like... Yeah. It's the "DDR Competition!" one. Yeah. You rock... You rock my **... |
| somethingsup 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Keep it up! ^_^ |
| Belle Fille x 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. It's like, ironic in a way. Kudos! ^-^ |
| Wingsister 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! I loved the ending. Yes I did get my nickname from Mercedes Lackey's novels... |
| Atrum Animus 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was very cute. In fact, I'm still smiling. Okay, grinning like an idiot. That's the pervert in me (Down, restless beast!). Really great story! |
| Widom 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuse*cackle* Oh, the horror...that's a blind date for you. I think the only way they work out well is if somebody is actually blind. *shakes head* Oh well. Nice little story. Made me chuckle. |
| KillerLover 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI feel a tad silly to mention (especially in a review...) that the sequel is already up..and on it's 11th chapter? Oh and don't worry... there's angst (I think?) in it. heh. But thank you dear. :) |
| xxbloody-heartsxx 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was cute, great job, and I love the name Taite. Nice! -golf clap- |
| Graphiti Skies 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseXD The ending is great and the point of view switch you threw in there was perfect for getting to said ending. ^.^ Awesome job. |
| The Asian Banana 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseMiyoko say more sex! LOLOLOLOL!1 I lick this sometime! But not today! That is joke! ^^ YOu understane?! I like this for real! ~Check out my story with Chiquita-san! It is quit hot and has much sex! ^^ It is best story on FICTIONPRESS! |