Okay, this is your version of death, I presume? It's rather odd, but I like it alot. It's kind of confusing at parts, but I like to think it was made that way, and for some reason, it adds somewhat to the aura of the story... *goes off and thinks some more* Top job there, old chap! ...

Now this is interesting. This would probably make a good story. you have to continue to see.

I would have liked to know what happened to Teshi. I really liked this one too. I like that he’s not simply an angel of death, but something much more interesting and unique. If he knew about what the man did to be judged, then why didn’t he know about Teshi’s ‘sins’ if he had any? Or maybe I shouldn’t ask. Well, anyway… as always, you are brilliant. I loved his memories of Teshi. This definitely has the potential to become something more should you decide to expand upon it. If not, that’s okay too. It’s great as a one-shot. :3

definitely has potential

But it has potential, in my opinion...

oh YEAH it does! just to explain all these burning questions now! like...why was Teshi supposed to die? how exactly was he killed? everything left unsaid!

but yeah, this was extrememly interesting, definately worth a few moments of reading!