I realy like this so far. Not much to review; sorry this is so short! ^_^ I'l be waiting hapily for an update! :)

I like this a lot so far! Interesting format, I like it.

Hope you update soon!

I am still working on this, but I am REALLY bad at updating. If you want to read more that I've written, email me at veggie1@gmail.com

Short, but it grabbed my attention. Are you still working on this one? Keep writing! ~Jessica