Favorite line: "I'm falling forever/And I just hit the ground." It's an oxymoron, but it works! Nice work. Keep writing! :)

yet another great one!

I love ur poems, seriously powerful stuff. and I shall continue Slide, its my fav to write. I just like having fun with it and I'm not afraid to go back and try again. Thats whats so fun about it. It's my little expirement,

nice rhythm to it.

wow. nicely done!