They're gay?!? Well there's a twist I wasn't expecting! No matter, it's great and I hope that Sae can save Meliore before it's too late. Once again an excellent installment but I personally wouldn't have brought in a relationship at this stage (just me though and I'm wierd). Still, it's your story and you should write it however you want,

Stick with it and keep up the good work,Galleena

they _were_ doing naughty things on the roof! o_o gasp! TRT-sama, you naughty naughty girl.

meliore reminds me of you, my dear. --;;

poor Sae. the confusions of love! will he have to fight dragons and stuff?

--futomi-ish person

pretty names. ^^

um...you'd better write more soon, 'cause this is interesting. yes indeed. however...this comment seems out of place...

"like AIDS?" I dunno. it seems that way. ^^:

Love it. I'm going to add this to my favourites and hope you up-date soon. This could have been a dark story but you took a more humourous approach and it works brillantly. I hope you keep up the good work and I hope more people will review so Melinore will survive for longer