Well written, just like your other stories. Although there are a few spelling mistakes, it was all pretty good.

this seems like it'll be a good story. kinda slow, but hopefully i'll get into it.

take your time with the next chapter, a little suspense never killed anyone...;>>

i seriously cant wait for the next update!

this one has a lot of potential, keep it up!

that was really good. it has a lot to build onto. keep writing.

I just started reading this and I was drawn in. You are an amazing writer. Telling us little details without revealing everything...that is great storytelling. Nice job!

4.0 average... i figured its really good, but how good is that? the best u can get?anyway.. so far i like it... I dun kno wot more to say since it wasnt very long... anyways.. i have to go.. my brother wants the computer..

Jany

Sounds like a good story. Update soon after Seeing Through Tears, which is also really good!

good so far... try and throw in an unexpected thing... like a boy... *grins*

This was ewally good well can't wait to you update... toodles

~tickles!~

I wish more stories at FP took the "interpretive" format you've stated guides this one. Good literature, in my opinion, refrains from explaining itself or its characters. I love being introduced to a character through actions and even more, through dialogue instead of an internal monologue of introduction. Kudos to you for doing this for your assignment!

C

I like. Keep going. It looks like a good start with potential.

A new story...so it is... and a bit different from the normal ones. interesting, and not toally sure where its going, but hey, keep me on my toes, huh? lol. good luck w/ STT

It's really good. The only problem with interpretive literature is that is can very really slow and hard to follow at times but it seems that yours is interesting I can't wait to read more.