u need to update this please. i beg of u :) hahah :) lol.

I Love the start of this story, and I am sad that you weren't able to continue you it. Hopefully one day you'll look back on this and update it!

Oh man, this is fantastic!
The writing is amazing and the characters are great. : )

I'm really loving this so far and I would love to read more! I hope you will write more because it really is such a good idea, and your style so far has been everything and entertaining!
--Joe

no matter what ppl say about cliches, i'm in love w/ my brothers best friend and he's in love w/ me 2 (i think lol).
So it does happen. although, unlike this story, i don't have guys flocking to me so my bro doesnt need to 'protect' me.
I love your penname. Your story is awesome. I hope you are still writing it.

luv you dahling, update wont'cha?

Hello,

I absolutely love your story. I am so anxious to know what will happen next. Please update as soon as you can.

AliveAwakeandBroken

This is brilliant!! It's a shame that you haven't written in so long! I still really enjoyed it! Maybe you could continue?? That would be great. =]

OMG please, please, please update son!
it's so interesting!

i didn't realize that there were only 2 chapters! i really really liked them! is there anyway that you could continue with this story?? pretty please??

i like it!

why'd you stop DAMMIT i wanted to read more *crosses arms over chest and pouts in a corner* i like it alot, yoe shuld kee poing

Talk about interesting. Please continue

I've just stumbled upon your stories and I have to say this is a great story I know you havent updated this in a while but I'm hoping you continue with this story

This has *got* to be a new record.

It took you only two (*TWO*) chapters to hook me and make me want more.

*sigh*

This is sad... I'm about ready to beg for more...