|Reviews for Snow Child|
| nothere3 5/15/06 . chapter 1
So... this isn't like boy/girl kissing. I sense that it's more of a parent/child relationship you're getting into. Otherwise that'd be just creepy...
| nothere3 5/15/06 . chapter 7
I finally read it all! Did she die? There's something I'm not really getting that transitions from the two of them together to him being apart from her.
| Miss-Nina 3/1/06 . chapter 7
I luv luv luv your writing, Chobi! I can relate to every feeling you describe. Like the cold air, and the emptiness I sometimes feel. You make the story really engrossing and intersting, when really not much is happening. When you write, I can feel what he is feeling, too. You are AwESoMe! PHWEE! I got a mention. Bows, thanks. Oh, and how do you know so much about the editors and writers and stuffs? I dont know that. (But then again, I'm 12. T_T ) I lurv yur story! update!
luv little sis,aina-chan
PS: Sorry you weren't on my favorites list for so long! I didn't realize. Jeez, I'm an idiot. lol, anyways until next time!
| Miss-Nina 12/18/05 . chapter 6
_ Yay! You updated! I loved the chapter. I like the way you describe things. It's a really nice and safisticated way of writing, Chobi-Chan. (Better then anything I can do.) I can't wait for the update! Did I miss something or did Yukiko just disapear? Anyways, your story is luvly!
| Miss-Nina 11/27/05 . chapter 5
WHA? Yukiko's gone? The end left me all puzzled! But still, wonderful chapter. I was readinig your profile and I think that you CAN get it published.
But for something to work on, when you do quotes, there whould be a space between the sentance before and the quoted sentance.
Bad Example- She dropped the bag."oh no." It makes it face the wrong way. The stupid computers are so confusing.
Good Example- She dropped the bag. "oh no."
Anyways, beautiful chapter. I want to see the next chapter up really really soon, okay? Pwez...?
| Miss-Nina 11/20/05 . chapter 4
Another beautiful chapter, Chobi. I think you're a really good writer and your stories are relaxing and easy to understand.
| Miss-Nina 11/12/05 . chapter 3
Oh no! Did she die...? You left a very mysterious end to this chapter, Chobi. I really like the story so far. Its a fav
Sorry I haven't read in a while. I remember the story and came back. Poor Yukiko, abused. I feel her pain.
| Miss-Nina 9/6/05 . chapter 2
Aw, and I thought she was a sweet little girl. Darn brat! What a little... don't want to say it...
Anyways, besides that, I love it!
| Miss-Nina 8/30/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful! But what a sad story. Sort of a stupid little girl, eh? Sits for 6 ours when its snowing out at night?
I really luv the details. Eiri kind of reminded me of Johnny Depp's role in "The Secret Window."
Great. I'll be back for 2.
| chubrock 8/15/05 . chapter 5
very good abuser i loved it i loved put more up so i can read it
| Chell-o Bodello 7/25/05 . chapter 5
Aw ... Yukiko is so CUTE! And I love this story so far. Plus, the foreshadowing at the beginning and ending of the chapters have lead me to believe that something might happen ... *GASP* PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE continue soon!
| kekemapa 7/5/05 . chapter 5
AWESOME CHAPTER! D
| BunnySnogger 7/5/05 . chapter 5
The story is improving with every chapter. Is Eiri becominging a softy? Oh la la. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| BunnySnogger 7/5/05 . chapter 4
You've got me sitting on the edge of my seat in suspense, Chobi. Your grammer is a lot better in this chapter than the first one. The plot is smoothly moving along and I can't wait to see what I happens.
| BunnySnogger 7/5/05 . chapter 3
The idea of Eiri being anyone's father is very scary. I wonder what happened to Yukiko...guess I'll find out later.