Well, as you'll guess, I love this as well. Some parts I don't understand, but I might need some time to read it over again. It's still beautiful and very sad, even without the sad ending

Another awesome poem, Mia! I love the line about the moonlight. And the one about the cyanide. Good job!

i dont see the sad ending.. teh poem makes me think the girl liked him for a while & was his best friend & always tehre for him & in the end he loves her too, but tahts jsut me.. either way its beautifully written

Wow, I really like the style.. it's such a bittersweet piece. Poor guy. You shouldn't worry about whether people "get it" or not.. that's the great thing about poetry, you know. It means different things to different people - but most important is whatever it means to the writer. Nobody else NEEDS to know.. they'll interpret as they will. I mean, no reader can ever get EVERY meaning behind the words.. only the writer knows everything. *shrugs* So even if people get an entirely different story/feeling from it than you did, it's still a great poem because it did its job of getting a reaction.

Your not weird. ;P I rally can't explain this, I have mixed ideas (may be due to the headache I have) but I saw this as a very sweet, romantic poem. But also somewhat amgsty. O_o I could see how it could have had a tragic ending but I'm glad it doesn't. TT_TT I wouldn't be able to handle that. ;_; Well done as always and amazingly beautiful!

!~* noelle *~!