Great poem.

But what if photographs lie? Very interesting poem.

That's pretty good! Thanks for reviewing my story!

Very true. At least at certain points in our lives. I like how you capitalized "Heart". Thank you for your review. And also, I like what you said about dark & angsty stuff at the end of your bio; I agree. Just recently somebody told me they don't appreciate dark writing, like mine, but sometimes people fail to see the other side of things. Great job on the poem.

You could possibly do more with situation, as it feels very direct, but I really like the poem and it gets the mind working. How memories are always so faulty, always trimmed with a bias. Can't be trusted in the same way that history can't. Great job.

Jess