Lyssa, I love this it is so touching and so sad and It is just so great I love it! Keep writing! bi.

*sniffs* How very sad...not really sure what to say about this one, other than it was well-written. Keep up the good, heart-wrenching work, hun : )

Bittersweet, sad song, though I must say that it ended far differently than I would have expected. I guess the descriptions of their union together was a little more negative than positive, but it was a shock to see in the end her wanting to join him. Nicely written, though, with some great lines. I liked, "And every night the blade of reality, carved more scars into my sanity." Great job.

Jess