Wow. I can't think of anything else to say...just Wow. I stink at writing poetry, but you... again, Wow. Absolutely WONDERFUL.:>

Awesome. I really like your work so far, and i've only read two. This one seems like it's just really sad thoughts from some memory. I like the story you sort of add to it, and it ties all together really well.

This was interesting... very interesting... don't worry, its not too long for a poem in my eyes. I enjoyed reading it, though I don't love it as much as some of your other works, I still liked it alot. I'm one closer to my goal...~Natalie

personally i don't really like long poems but that could be due to my laziness but since its yours i read it.I'm glad i did actually, this poem is actually really good. I like the way it is structured and the way the emotions seem to be pouring out. Good job. kudos

wow, very emotional. I like this piece alot.Keep it up.

P.S. it's not too long, I have one thats exactly 150, it all still qualifies. again, good job.

Solo.