This is dark but, I'm attracted to it's darkness like a moth to a flame.

Whoot! Poor Alaric, but that's completely kick **, staying alive for eight hours! ^.^ He'd last in a zombie infested world, that's fer sure!

You're a dirty, dirty human being. XP But I want you to keep writing more because I want to see my Mai. XD; (Mahahah. OTP. XD *dies and flees in ghos form*)

This sounds pretty good, I really want to read more. Please update soon. :)

Ack, that last part... *shudder* Ne...

Anyway, very well done, poor Alaric though!

I really like this story! please continue. update soon! :D

OHM, teh story of Alaric!! I can't wait to see teh ending, whootness!! *glompage tightly* I love it so far, simple yet you know **'s goin' down.

oh intreegre.. how ever u spell that... its a good start, please carry on!