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| Purpleriho 2007-11-11 ch 3, | abuseYOU! update son pwease!! |
| ola 2007-09-04 ch 3, | abusehaha, mm, i think i already read this story a while back, but i just re-read the whole thing. quite nice. actually, i really like it a lot. simple, but engaging, and with enough of an event to make it intriguing and believable. really nice work. keep it up! and thanks for posting it! |
| blueberrysundae 2007-02-11 ch 3, | abuseThis is really cute and sweet. Liked it a lot! |
| Awe 2006-10-25 ch 3, | abuse*laughing* that was a great way to end! Hah, 'No!' Better then classic. I found afew spelling errors (like a random 's' someplace) but what's the current Best Thing Ever without some imperfections, right? (I have to say, I competely share the 'babe' sentiment. I'm not sure what I'd /do/ exactly, to anyone who called me that, but it would be far from pleseant. Same for 'baby' too. Eugh.) Story has been favorited. Now! Back to Clouded Daylight! Ahoy! |
| Awe 2006-10-25 ch 2, | abuseWow...the detail, and image, and--! You're great at subtleties. (>.> you shouldn't keep doing the 'reviews are good' thing. I'm going to overflood your inbox or something.) *excited for the next chapter* |
| Awe 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseYou recc'ed this in the MIDDLE of teh other story, and I was ohsosmart and went to read it immediatly. Gah...this is /good/. And now I'm in the middle of two stories of yours. With an early wake-up tomorrow. X_x XD Marin is AWESOME. I loved how he replied when asked about the muffin. And his cluelessness. OCD a bit, huh? Well done, letting us know. You wrote it very well. Also loved how snappish he was at the end. And his outraged yells XD ...okay, basically I liked everything. (and I'm lucky that this only has three chapters, because that means I might be able to finish it and get back to the OTHER story before I collapse from sleep-deprivation.) (...you don't rec any of your other fics in this one, do you? X_x) |
| Seque Me ad Meum Somnium 2006-07-28 ch 3, | abuseI read your whole story and absolutly loved it...let me say that again...I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT! In fact, I've loved all of you stories (that i've read). Keep up writing, you are my daily dose of addictive euphoria! |
| Lami 2006-07-23 ch 3, | abusethis fic is also like raspberry tea! it made me smile:) nice bit of background for them all (i read daylight first:) |
| Prisoner-11 2006-03-11 ch 3, | abuseHazah. Another good story. |
| Yoyo-chan 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* Stupid fp.com, not letting me do arrows. Anyway, that's my favorite line. also: OMG I LOVE THIS STORIE PLZ UPDATE SOON! |
| Yoyo-chan 2006-01-18 ch 2, | abuseYou don't accept anonymous reviews and I already reviewed chapter 3 so I have to review chapter two. *sigh* That’s it, you’re never topping. You can’t even get the key in the hole. |
| Yoyo-chan 2005-10-08 ch 3, | abuseCute cute cute cute cute cute ^_^. *loves Marin and Teigue so much* Also I can't wait for Perry to get his. He needs someone to keep him in line, ok? So work on the other story XD Also I think there are some characters Elf-girl can't leave alone >D |
| xanthofile 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseoh yes, i have to agree with you on the fact that this is one of the best. made me crack a smile throughout the entire piece. |
| pneumothorax 2005-08-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm re-reading this and I still adore it. The waking up scene in chap 2 I loved along with the general interaction between the two characters. Warm feeling extraordinaire you are. It seems Perry got over the idea of the break-up quickly, although if he knew, that works fine. Well written. Much envy. |
| swordgirl-amy 2005-07-19 ch 3, | abuseOh wow I really liked this story. It was just do cute!! I love Teigue, but then again I have a thing for Irishmen, and he is just my tpye. To bad he was gay, but that was just fine too, and quite a yummy read in some parts. I hope to get to your other stories soon, as well I am sure they are most likey to be just as good. -Amy- |