That was really adorable. Teigue was awesome. Loved it.

aw, so cute ^^

YAYAAYAYAYAY!! I just want to explode these are so ADORABLE!

YES!! I so love love love love love this!

OMG I love your stories. They're all so CUTE!

Cute =)

Rin-rin made me laugh. A sweet story overall, if yaois are considered sweet... >_>

marin's anxiety made me anxious...

YOU! update son pwease!!

haha, mm, i think i already read this story a while back, but i just re-read the whole thing. quite nice. actually, i really like it a lot. simple, but engaging, and with enough of an event to make it intriguing and believable. really nice work. keep it up! and thanks for posting it!

This is really cute and sweet. Liked it a lot!

*laughing* that was a great way to end! Hah, 'No!' Better then classic. I found afew spelling errors (like a random 's' someplace) but what's the current Best Thing Ever without some imperfections, right?

(I have to say, I competely share the 'babe' sentiment. I'm not sure what I'd /do/ exactly, to anyone who called me that, but it would be far from pleseant. Same for 'baby' too. Eugh.)

Story has been favorited. Now! Back to Clouded Daylight! Ahoy!

Wow...the detail, and image, and--!

You're great at subtleties.

(>.> you shouldn't keep doing the 'reviews are good' thing. I'm going to overflood your inbox or something.)

*excited for the next chapter*

You recc'ed this in the MIDDLE of teh other story, and I was ohsosmart and went to read it immediatly. Gah...this is /good/. And now I'm in the middle of two stories of yours. With an early wake-up tomorrow. X_x

XD Marin is AWESOME. I loved how he replied when asked about the muffin. And his cluelessness. OCD a bit, huh? Well done, letting us know. You wrote it very well. Also loved how snappish he was at the end. And his outraged yells XD

...okay, basically I liked everything. (and I'm lucky that this only has three chapters, because that means I might be able to finish it and get back to the OTHER story before I collapse from sleep-deprivation.)

(...you don't rec any of your other fics in this one, do you? X_x)

I read your whole story and absolutly loved it...let me say that again...I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT! In fact, I've loved all of you stories (that i've read). Keep up writing, you are my daily dose of addictive euphoria!