Nicely written. I couldn't help but glare at the screen after I had read the ending, but then I thought, leave it up to the imagination! Great job!

Oh, that was very, very good. The ending is brilliant, espcially as it doesn't ACTUALLY say what happened. You know what PROBABLY happened ... but maybe ... it's a great sort of ending because it's actually quite chilling. Excellent.

BASTARD!Really tense story. Good idea for a creepy set-up and I want to steal this idea and use it myself sometime (j/k!) A few repetitions of words that sounded clunky, though.But that ending is cruel!