Reviews for The Blue of the Nile

Brightstarr-Bella
2005-05-16
ch 1,

abuseWow... interesting, creates SUCH a picture in my mind!! Wonderful use of language and vocabulary. Just one thing I noticed, "Carries all cares away" sounds a bit awkward... just because carry and care sound alike. Just a suggestion though, and a small one at that. Keep writing!

*Bella*

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