Aw, sweet poem, but if you publish online then surely there are those that recognize you and your talent

As to the airplane, i've thousands of times, and it's no big deal.Just bring some gum, when you r up in the air and they depresurraize the cabin your head may feel weird, any gum helps. Or sucking candy. Well, enjoy your trip!

And, WRITE ON!

I like the thought and meaning in this poem, along with the vocabulary. One thing you should watch, if you're doing a poem like this that has a rythm pattern in the beginning you should stick to it, some sentences seem to long to fit in. I face this problem a lot, too :S Keep up the good work and keep writing!

*Bella*

~Kia Kha~