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Reviews For: 1944

Kenny's Friend 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseThe opening was good. I liked your development of the battle, although it seemed a bit too mild. Every time I read a historical fiction of D-Day, I think 'Saving Private Ryan' and how graphic it was - how realistic. You created a good fiction, but it was missing realism - almost like watching a war movie on mute, it didn't seem like Werner was actually under attack until the rocket killed his partner. But I'm just nitpicking - you are a talented author, and I hope you'll keep writing in the future.
Redeemed 2006-01-25 ch 1,	abuseFantasticly written. I'm a huge fan of World War II, and I've been really waiting for someone to take the view of the Germans. No critism to offer you; it's rare, but it happens :p
Arkash 2005-05-29 ch 1,	abuseVery good imagery in this short piece. Poor Werner. All in all this is well written. Good Job! _
Cerebus 2005-05-24 ch 1,	abuseNicely Done! Well written, tense, and nice use of adjectives. I like the non-hollywood ending, but didn't I see the part about "letting him burn" in "Saving Private Ryan"? Otherwise, most excellent!
Broadus 2005-05-17 ch 1,	abuseOoh, great. Nice use of words. I have terrible problems actually writing stories. I have the plot idea and everything, then I'm stuck.
Samuel T. Findlay 2005-05-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best action sequence I've read recently on this site. The moment is captured and rendered perfectly in this passage. It was a absorbing with vivid description that conjured up the desired imagery. Congratulations on writing a great piece.
Wings As Eagles 2005-05-16 ch 1,	abuseGood grief! That was...something! I admit I wasn't quite sure what to make of the ending at first, but I liked how you captured D-day through the view of a German soldier. And you certain portrayed the horrors of war very realistically.

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