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| laughing in her sleep 2006-05-20 ch 1,  | abusesounds like a song i know...simple but full of emotion. good job! |
| GetBehindMeSatan 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseO. What does this remind me of...? meh. ^^;; I never did have a good memory. Anyway! The poem is short, but, in a way, that makes it better. You've filled so much emotion into the poem! People have always said that I need more emotion in my writing, so for me, that's a good thing. I liked this part of the poem best, though relly, it was all very good. "Hurt me Save me Please don’t ignore me" Struck a nerve in me, somehow. I'll try and review some more of you're stuff when I get the chance! Best of Luck in writing! Chaanna (P.S. Thank you for the review of Crushing in a Lift. I might be doing a prequal to that, so, if you liked Crushing in a Lift, you might like that. ^^; :D Ja ne for now.) |
| snowystarshine 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is deep. Sounds like lyrics to a song. Good job. ~Keirya |
| Na'rmer 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseHold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me, Kill Me! I mean it... just joking! You must like this song, don't you? Would you mind checking some of the pieces I posted just soon? Hold you, Thrill You, Kiss you... Please you? >:) |
| Ryu's Kitty 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHm, after reading that I felt stupid. I know I've heard something like that somewhere before. Hm, something must have greatly inspired this, but it doesn't come to mind. It's probably just the title though. XD I love this poem. Short and to the point. |
| unrequitedx 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWow... nice... it sounds more of a lyric, lol, nice poetry though~ |
| Torn Lover 2005-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am an author on here but didn't feel like signing in. I really like this poem. I have one on mine that it reminds me of. Look up teased if you get a chance. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abusesimple yet powerful. very well done! |
| Need 'n' Know 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseShort and to the point! It sounds like a song. The last line has no "me." Wow. Julia. |
| visodyssey 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseAnd onto the first of your poems that I've reviewed! A lot of emotion covered in a VERY tiny space. I'm impressed. Desperation seems to top off all of the other emotions. Desperation to be recognised, to be used, to be seen... if even as just an instrument of someone else's pleasure or as a slave for another needs. A need that plagues a good deal of the people that I have met in my lifetime. The need to be recognised. A testament to both your writing ability, and that it is possible to speak volumes in but a few dozen words. ~Steve~ |
| Robert 2005-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse...Very good. Seriously, I was very suprised when I saw the length. I thought my page hadn't loaded properly. But after reading it, I must say I found it rather... stiring. o.o I think everybody at some point in their life has been in that sort of situation- Wanting someone to notice them, or pay them heed. Because they feel that that person is the only one who can make them feel like they are 'something'. *nod* You've touched on that rather well. I wish I got portray that kind of emotion and depth in my art. XD *goes back to drawing typical ol' catgirls* :3 |
| DeViLDaughTeR 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAww..a whole lot of emotion in so few words. Awesome. |