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| xx Sakura Kiss xx 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseHoly ** , i usually find agsnt stories not enjoyful at all, but this one short one-shot just blew me away, i was left wide open. I loved it, you're a very well talented writer. It'd be really good if you wrote how they met and how they got to where they are now. :o...cause this doesn't tell us much about the characters, well yeah it does...but curiosity still has me. :D;; WEll once again, i'll say this story is amazingly written. :] |
| anon 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI want to know more. |
| lilyevensj 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseokay thats a very disturbing yet true to reality story... its good im not sure if i like it or don't like it im confused :S |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the first time i've read something like this...the intensity of it was overwhelming!!and the fact that people become dependent on a particular person to this extent and to give away the power to control them to someone else is really scary! |
| your harbor 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was just, awesome. I must admit -- I loved it. Great job. It was just so, I don't know, like. Powerful. Not to mention, the writing was amazing. This was amazing. AGAIN, GREAT JOB ! |
| ess3sandra 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abusedramtic dramatic |
| emotionless-stares 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThat almost made me cry..Kinda sad.. |
| Written 2007-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseemotional abuse is no better than physical abuse. been there, done that. this story really affected me. in the bad way. [but that's a good thing] well done. |
| AphroditeLives 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Simply amazing. I am not capable of expressing how good that was. Thank you. |
| BITT3RSW33T 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was crazy short, but it was good. I don't know if continuing it will make it lose it's goodness, but I'm aching to read more. |
| AmbrosiusEmrys 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWell written |
| Michelle Habibi 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abusei wouldve liked the guy tell her he was sorry and say 'i love you' to her, ridding the girls of her misery but i guess not all heros in every romance story are completley and utterly in love with the heroine...it was pretty good, though. it was a change from other romances and...refreshing. for some reason i feel like i could do anything! sorry, does that sound weird to you? i have a tendency to turn into a crazed lunatic sometimes so ill just end this review here: -Michelle Habibi |
| Genato 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseit was depressing.. it's way ouch. but i like it anyways... i did hope you wrote a happy ending though.. sucker for happy endings.. oh wellz... |
| SillyDarkness 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseGod I have read so many stories and poems and since this is kind of like a combo it doesn't really matter since this is the best story and poem i have read in a while and I have read so many so called 'good' pieces of work you should write a book you could go big. |
| love4ever 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved it... i really did. i seriously cried when i read it. It's so powerful, you really chose the right words to communicate the emotions. I loved how you didn't use any names becasue that made it all the more powerful. I really liked how you used the word poison, that was good... you know, the guy doesn't seem that bad anymore... i think he might at least care for her but i'm not even gonna ask... it was just a really good read... |