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DemonicAngelicVampire 2008-09-28 ch 46,	abuseI loved this! Very much, And I especially love your character's personalities! FAVS!! xD
Sasquatch 2008-07-13 ch 47,	abuseYour a God/Goddess in my eyes, twas awesome, totally. =D
bookworm-lovingedward 2008-05-15 ch 6,	abuseeek! this is amazing!! i LOVE ur stories, want. read. more.! lol, keep writing, ur amazing!
Scarlet Horror 2008-04-15 ch 11,	abuseBrian is so evil ;) Mind games and lots of food... loved that... must remember it :)
Scarlet Horror 2008-04-15 ch 2,	abuseAh! So Niko was straight after all. Damon seems hot and wild. I need to read the other stories :)) You're addictive.
Scarlet Horror 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseYe... found the sequel. I guess I will find out about Niko and Trent after all. :)
Bedlam Chaos 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseI'm going to Boston in a few months... And guess what on earth made me want to go to that city in the United States instead of a hundred of others? Yeah... Your story. It could be silly but I don't think so ^^". So thank you for these wonderful stories and keep up ;)
True.Randomness 2007-11-17 ch 47,	abuseI have read all of the series till so far and this is looking like one the best stories thus far. I can't find anything I don't like. I loved the characters, I loved the plot, I LOVED the drama, and the crossovers were magnificent. Specially since they lead me to that also great authorship of princess max. Your stories are fantatic. Thank you for writing them.
Sunshinefox87 2007-11-13 ch 47,	abuseI just love the family!, who won't want to be apart of that group? I love the story!
Skyla Ladona 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseI read this a while ago and really enjoyed it. My favorite character is Brian. I read his story too. You have a good mixture of humor, angst, and romance in all of your stories. Keep up the good work. I want to see what happens to Cody and Grant in their story. Skyla Ladona
shake.the.bones 2007-06-14 ch 33,	abuseI have greatly enjoyed your story and all the characters, and as stated in my first review when I found out that one of the characters was epileptic, I'm ecstatic that the disorder is being made known to a wider aduience. The one thing I was a little upset about was some of the inaccuracies I found. I can't recall all of them, but I'll point out the one in this chapter as it is the most recent. "The doc’s pleased with the last round of tests. Says I’ll likely never have to worry about severe seizures again, and that if I do get any, they’d be light and over quickly.” Unless Damon went through a more intense series of treatments, such as brain surgery or the installation of a Vegas Nerve Stimulator, there would be no way for the doctor to be able to know that he wasn't going to have to deal with severe seizures ever again, unless his seizures were the results of an accident or more recent trauma to the brain, which you've given no indication that they are. Medication, in the long run, can't really put a stop to grand maul seizures in people that have experienced them for a long time, unless given to the patient in large doses, in combination with other medications, for extensive periods of time. Despite the errors correlating to Damon's epilepsy (which can only be spotted by an expert or someone like me who has experienced epilepsy for themselves), this story has been wonderfully well-written and is one of my favorites. Please consider this review to be nothing but constructive criticism. My only real advice would be to put more research into the subject next time. Keep up the great writing. :D - AeleIce.
Bedlam Chaos 2007-06-12 ch 2,	abuseI think I'm reading this story for the sixth or the seventh time since I followed Damon in America... I was thinking about something. How could Trent have a monk live style if he went to uni. I don't know in America but here... ^^" It's nearly impossible to not go out and drink at least once a month and... Het' or gay, it doesn't matter: it's easy to find someone. Maybe Louvain-la-Neuve is a special case. An Irish friend said it wasn't the same and that my uni was the best (never doubt about it myself ;) ) but... Like Trent seems gorgeous and even if he's gay, I wonder how he kept his virginity for so long. I'll try to check myself ;). One day (or more) I will go and check american university life style...
shake.the.bones 2007-06-11 ch 6,	abuseIt's not every day you see characters with epilepsy in yaoi fics. Which is a refreshing change, believe me, especially for an epileptic. :D I'm glad that my disorder isn't as unknown as I thought it was and thank you for writing it into your story. It spreads the awareness about seizures. I feel special. XD - AeleIce
BlueHeart102 2007-02-04 ch 1,	abuseomg sorry I didn't you really had made asequel for Trent. Dooh my head for not looking first. Well Brian's story was my first story of yours. So I haven't finished all of ur story yet but I will soon. Man I have a lot to read after Moving On I think I would get to Kevin's story or should I go with Kevin's story first since it's happened first. Argg I wish I have a lot of me so I can read them all at the same time lol. Omg I been reading ur story since yesterday(after I discovered them) and I haven't do my hw yet. Hic I have to make an outline for my essay but it's so hard. I'm not very creative and I hate to write (since I'm suck) BUT I really really LOVE to read lol. I'm damn selfish eh?. OMG I been blah blah balh since sorry about this. Ok nowI'm going to read Kevin's story first (finally decided rolling eyes) Thanks again
stripedsocksarecool 2006-11-14 ch 11,	abuseBrian is so SCANDELOUS! He would make a good main character on "Desperate Housewives" lol. I love him, though. I can't wait to see what happens, so i guess I'm off to read more chapters. Just had to say it, though. Ta!

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